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Satan and his stories

Post by Razel on Wed Feb 04, 2015 10:47 am

...I have to admit. I loved the story but at the end, It kinda destroyed everything. it was funny anyway xD LMAO



You guys have to admit it was funny at the end right?






It was interesting/funny seeing ur own genderbend self in the story lol.

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Re: Satan and his stories

Post by الذئب on Wed Feb 04, 2015 10:58 am

Reading through this and it has sooo many mistakes.

Godamnit, next time I write DCMS fic I'll give my editor a ring.

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Re: Satan and his stories

Post by Razel on Wed Feb 04, 2015 11:21 am

LOL it was so interesting to me that i didn't really take note of the mistake in it xD

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Re: Satan and his stories

Post by Lasor on Thu Feb 05, 2015 8:52 pm

This guy is a weirdo bounce

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